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Kari had always been a big girl both in height and in weight, she would have to order her clothes online. She didn’t mind what people thought of her, she knew that she didn’t over eat. It just seemed that no matter what she ate she was always gonna be a big girl, but the last few months she seemed to of got bigger. First she noticed her belly started to grow a little then her boobs too, she started getting weird trapped wind that would gurgle. It was like she had gas in her belly, and she seemed to get heartburn so much.
She was a bit of a loner, she had friends but they lived across the country. She had never had a boyfriend, tho
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DragonBall FF: Saiyan Stomach Problems
It was another beautiful day over West City as they held one of their many annual martial arts tournaments. There wasn’t a cloud in the sky as a hundred thousand people cheered in the stands of the three sided stadium. In the middle of the stadium was its perfect 4 sided ring. This year it sparkled in the midday sun thanks to the diamond rock it was made out of. You know, for those more… intense fights.
As the 6th fight of the day came to an end, the crowd roared as the winner held their arms up in victory. As soon as the medics evacuated the stage with the barely conscious fighter, a tall, well dressed, blond man who wore a pai
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Lori's Emergency Dump
Anon was walking down the streets and was about to pass by the restrooms. He sees Lori in a line as she holds her stomach. "This sucks, I need to go to the bathroom!" Anon: Hmm?" He looks to see the desperate woman He sees that it's Lori Loud. Anon: Uh, hey, are you... ok? Lori: "GRRRRRRRRRR" No, I need to poop. Anon: Oh. I-Is it that bad? Lori nods. Anon: M-Maybe I can help you find a place to go? Lori: That would be nice. Anon: Come with me then. Let's see where we can go Lori nods as she follows him. Anon: Um, what exactly did you eat? Lori: Beans and BBQ flavored bean chips. Anon: Those sound interesting. Though I guess your stomachs not agreeing to that. Lori: It's not." GRRRRRRRRRRR Anon:If you need to... let out some pressure. I won't mind it. Lori: Thanks. "FRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRT!!" She let out a huge stinky fart. Anon: Heh-heh, nice one. Lori: Thanks. Anon: Hmm... I think I see alleyway a little over there. Lori: Alright. Anon: We're almost there. Are you
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Ever have thoughts about what lives in your walls? And what they might be doing inside of them? I'm sure you've thought about it, so here's part of a look at the life of one such family living inside a wall! Meet Molly Devlin, an ordinary luchkin...with an extraordinary ability.
This took a little longer than I was expecting it to, but that seems to happen when I'm struck by inspiration, it seems. You take a look at one mousegirl booty, and suddenly the wheels start turning. Hope you all enjoy the tale of Molly Devlin!
This took a little longer than I was expecting it to, but that seems to happen when I'm struck by inspiration, it seems. You take a look at one mousegirl booty, and suddenly the wheels start turning. Hope you all enjoy the tale of Molly Devlin!
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Let's see what the fuck I think about this story. First off it's amazing, written with that good old Freeman storytelling flair. You got the setting established immediately to show we're in a small world of mice in a home, scavenging around and eating small foods.
Then the big shit happens, or rather it bubbles up in her tummy. You set the scene showing the urgency and familiarity the luchkin have with her dumps, and the adventure to the toil- *ahem* "Great White Lake" was very well written, showing the weight and size of that tummy. And the toilet scene was marvelous. It had a sense of real time and wonder, and the size comparisons were pretty good.
All in all this is a very good showcase of how micro hyper can be done. Hope to see that wall flooding potential she has sometime soon~
Then the big shit happens, or rather it bubbles up in her tummy. You set the scene showing the urgency and familiarity the luchkin have with her dumps, and the adventure to the toil- *ahem* "Great White Lake" was very well written, showing the weight and size of that tummy. And the toilet scene was marvelous. It had a sense of real time and wonder, and the size comparisons were pretty good.
All in all this is a very good showcase of how micro hyper can be done. Hope to see that wall flooding potential she has sometime soon~